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You must prepare a final project. Which style would you prefer?

You must prepare a final project. Which style would you prefer? 8dekV
My teacher or my employer usually don't ask this questions but if they are ask me this question. I would definitely prefer giving a class presentation because it has a lot of advantages and It is easier choice for me. These are three reason why I choose class presentation. I will gain self confidence, i will learn to better communicate and It improve my time management. It improve my time management. First of all, public speaking classes were making me a little bit nervous. For example I have forgotten what am i presenting in my first presentation and I have really embarrassed at that moment. But now I am making a lot of presentation and I am able to express myself with a confidence and with this if we are write a essay or design a poster we can clearly understand that we don't explain or say something to the public. Secondly, It improve our impromptu skills for instance when I was in the presentation and I did not memorise about what should I said therefore I looked at the smart board and made an impromptu later I never memorised what I was going to say again. Last but not least it helps me manage my time better. I have only a certain amount of time to present my final project so I have to learn how to communicate main idea of my presentation quickly and successfully and We do not just use time management for the presentation It can be part of our life Consequently In the final project making a presentation is better for audience and presenter because it will helpfull for time management, obtaining confidence and speak well in the public places
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usually
don't ask this questions
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but
if they are ask me this question. I would definitely prefer giving a
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class
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presentation
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because
it has
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a lot of
advantages and It is easier choice for me. These are three reason why I choose
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class
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presentation
. I will gain
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self confidence
,
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i
will learn to better communicate and It
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improve
my
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time
management. It
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improve
my
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time
management.

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First of all
, public speaking classes were making me a
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little bit
nervous. For
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example I
have forgotten what am
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i
presenting in my
first
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presentation
and I have
really
embarrassed at that moment.
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But
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now
I am making
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a lot of
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presentation and
I am able to express myself with a confidence and with this if we are
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write
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a
essay or design a poster we can
clearly
understand that we don't
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explain
or say something to the public.

Secondly
, It
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improve
our impromptu
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skills
for instance
when I was in the
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presentation
and I did not
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memorise
about what should I said
therefore
I looked at the smart board and made an impromptu later I never
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memorised
what I was going to say again.

Last
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helps
me manage my
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better. I have
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only
a certain amount of
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time
to present my final project
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so
I
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have to
learn how to communicate main
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idea
of my
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presentation
quickly
and
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successfully and
We do not
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use
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time
management for the
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It can be part of our life

Consequently
In the final project making a
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presentation
is better for audience and presenter
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because
it will
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helpfull
for
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time
management, obtaining confidence and speak well in the public
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IELTS essay You must prepare a final project. Which style would you prefer?

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4 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
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