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Email: From KhurliSent: SamSubject: a place to the art course I have been so glad to receive a letter with so specifics appeal from you. Besides that, I congratulate you on starting the courses. In such a way, we will pick up a place that is cozy for drawing together. But still, it would be a wonderful background in my wide garden which has been working for above 5 years. Moreover, I am designing the ground where to plant a variety of flowers on it. For me, I would prefer to be painted with a place where people are engaged in yoga exercises which are going to get opened yoga training. It will stay a wonderful memory of you. Write me, if you are content with my offer.
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specifics appeal from you.
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that is
cozy for drawing together.
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still
, it would be a wonderful background in my wide garden which has been working for above 5 years.
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, I am designing the ground where to plant a variety of flowers on it. For me, I would prefer to
be painted
with a place where
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people
are engaged
in yoga exercises which are going to
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opened yoga training. It will stay a wonderful memory of you. Write me, if you are content with my offer.
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