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Some people think that parents should tell stories or read to their children. However, others believe that these days this isn't necessary as children have so many other sources for stories, such as books, films and TV. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that parents should tell stories or read to their children. However, others believe that these days this isn't necessary as children have so many other sources for stories, such as books, films and TV. 117LG

Narrating stories to kids by parents are not worthy because of availability of plethora sources as per some forks while, I firmly accord with another notion that is telling stories by someone gives clear view and motivation to do something unique. Commencing with, kids can learn about stories by reading books and searching from internet. These sources might not be beneficial because while studying they may use internet for playing games and might be became more alienated. Reading alone will escalate chances of isolation and staying away from families. Opposite side, if grandparents or parents will impart stories to the young ones will make strong bond because at least get enough time to be with each other. When someone narrating stories, image will be more clearer and some kind of encouragement will generate because of clear facts. In own, in today's fast pace life become more tedious and monotonous due to the advent of technology, listening stories from parents and grandparents will chance to get rid from hectic life.

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stories
 to kids by parents are not worthy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of availability of plethora sources as per This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 forks while, I firmly
 accord with another notion that is
 telling You use this word too often, consider replacing it withversionfantasyfablebiographyinformationfeature
stories
 by someone gives This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 view and motivation to do something unique.

Commencing with, kids can learn about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withversionfantasyfablebiographyinformationfeature
stories
 by reading books and searching from internet. These sources might not be beneficial This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 while studying they may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 internet for playing games and might be Consider using a past participle here: "become".become
became
 more alienated. Reading alone will escalate chances of isolation and staying away from families.

Opposite side, if grandparents or parents will impart You use this word too often, consider replacing it withversionfantasyfablebiographyinformationfeature
stories
 to the young ones will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 strong bond This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 at least This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 time to be with each other. When someone The pronoun 'someone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "narrates", "narrated".narratesnarrated
narrating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withversionfantasyfablebiographyinformationfeature
stories
, image will be Use only "clearer" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.clearer
more clearer
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 kind of encouragement will generate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 facts.

In This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
, in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 pace life become more tedious and monotonous due to the advent of technology, listening You use this word too often, consider replacing it withversionfantasyfablebiographyinformationfeature
stories
 from parents and grandparents will chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
The usual collocation for "rid" is "of" not "from". Did you mean "rid of"?rid of
rid from
 hectic life. 