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I have been an active member of my local AFS chapter since I came back from KLYES Program in 2019. To begin with, I am a member of the sending department and the office bearer of my local AFS chapter. Consequently, I have participated in 2 discovery days as a speaker and have assisted my senior office bearer in preliminary application screenings including KLYES and Asia Kakehashi program. I am a member of the Change for Good 2021, which is a community service initiative by AFS India. I was one of the trainers in the virtual Pre-departure Orientation of KLYES 2021-22 Batch. Moreover, I have participated in the YES workshop on Peace & Conflict as one of the speakers. The workshop was held in one of the partnering schools in Bangalore and our goal was to make students better understand peace. I have also been engaged in the events organized by the US Consulate along with my local chapter. I have attended an alumni reception of the US Consulate on the inauguration of a community service committee. The US Consulate General of Hyderabad was the chief guest of that event, and I got a chance to interact with him personally. Furthermore, in my local AFS Chapter, we held chapter meetings once a month and the agenda are to catch up with all the senior and new alumni while discussing the action plan of our current and future chapter projects. Moreover, I also participated in a virtual chapter exchange program with Pune chapter. I was also a part of the introduction call by the newly appointed public affairs officer of the US Consulate Hyderabad. I have also been a part of the virtual and in-person meetings of my chapter with AFS India.
I have been an active member of my
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KLYES
Program in 2019. To
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begin
with, I am a member of the sending department and the office bearer of my
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local
AFS
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chapter
.
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, I have participated in 2 discovery days as a speaker and have assisted my senior office bearer in preliminary application screenings including
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KLYES
and Asia
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Kakehashi
program. I am a member of the
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Change
for
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Good
2021, which is a community service initiative by AFS India. I was one of the trainers in the virtual
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Pre-departure
Orientation of
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KLYES
2021-22 Batch.

Moreover
, I have participated in the YES workshop on Peace & Conflict as one of the speakers. The workshop
was held
in one of the partnering schools in Bangalore and our goal was to
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make
students better understand peace. I have
also
been engaged
in the
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events
organized by the US
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Consulate
along with my
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local
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chapter
. I have attended an alumni reception of the US
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Consulate
on the inauguration of a community service committee. The US
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Consulate
General of Hyderabad was the chief guest of that
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event
, and I
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got
a chance to interact with him
personally
.

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, in my
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local
AFS
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, we held
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chapter
meetings once a month and the agenda are to catch up with all the senior and new alumni while discussing the action plan of our
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current
and future
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chapter
projects.
Moreover
, I
also
participated in a virtual
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chapter
exchange program with Pune
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chapter
. I was
also
a part of the introduction call by the
newly
appointed public affairs officer of the US
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Consulate
Hyderabad. I have
also
been a part of the virtual and in-person meetings of my
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with AFS India.

IELTS essay hello describe your essay

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3 paragraphs
291 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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