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You have heard about plans to build

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My name is ghadir and iam one of yours fans of your newspaper, i have heard that government has plan to build new apartments i our local park, at the fisrt i did not take this seriously but when i saw enginneers measuring and calculating the deminsion on the park, i recognise that will be fakt. this park its very important for our area. This is only park some all people met there and only parkground for children. We all feel disappointed for this action, we hope if you can write an article about our problem, and for reach our sound. Thanks you very much.
My name is
ghadir
and
iam
one of yours fans of your newspaper,
i
have heard that
government
has plan to build new apartments i our local
park
, at the
fisrt
i
did not take this
seriously
but
when
i
saw
enginneers
measuring and calculating the
deminsion
on the
park
,
i
recognise
that will be
fakt
.
this
park
its
very
important
for our area. This is
only
park
some
all
people
met there and
only
parkground
for children. We all feel disappointed for this action, we hope if you can write an article about our problem, and for reach our sound.
Thanks you
very
much.
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IELTS essay You have heard about plans to build

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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