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You have heard about plans to build

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My name is ghadir and iam one of yours fans of your newspaper, i have heard that government has plan to build new apartments i our local park, at the fisrt i did not take this seriously but when i saw enginneers measuring and calculating the deminsion on the park, i recognise that will be fakt. this park its very important for our area. This is only park some all people met there and only parkground for children. We all feel disappointed for this action, we hope if you can write an article about our problem, and for reach our sound. Thanks you very much.
My name is
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ghadir
and
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iam
one of yours fans of your newspaper,
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i
have heard that
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government
has plan to build new apartments i our local
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park
, at the
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fisrt
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i
did not take this
seriously
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but
when
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i
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saw
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enginneers
measuring and calculating the
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deminsion
on the
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park
,
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i
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recognise
that will be
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fakt
.
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this
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park
its
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very
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important
for our area. This is
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only
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park
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some
all
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people
met there and
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only
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parkground
for children. We all feel disappointed for this action, we hope if you can write an article about our problem, and for reach our sound.
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Thanks you
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very
much.

IELTS essay You have heard about plans to build

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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