You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology. In your letter, you should: apology to your friendexplain why you couldn’t attend the partysay what steps you will take to avoid in future. v.1
You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apology. In your letter, you should: apology to your friendexplain why you couldn’t attend the partysay what steps you will take to avoid in future. v. 1
Many developed nations are facing lack of good nutrition and obesity. To solve this problem, some people argue that government should tax on fast food, but some argue that it is not a perfect solution.
On the one hand, fast foods are one of the causes of poor nourishment and obesity. Ingredients of fast food are often greasy, which can be side-effects for our health and it is not suitable for prolonged eating. However, because of its reasonable price, many people are still choosing fast foods instead of having a balanced-diet. For example, I would prefer a burger and coke for my lunch because I don't want to spend my time and money for a healthy meal. Besides, fast foods are available in many places. So, taxation on fast foods may bring a second-thought of buying and selling them to the consumers and the retailers respectively.
On the other hand, even the government will tax on fast food, the problems of health issues will not be minimized. Only a proper diet may bring sufficient nourishment and it will be beneficial for our fitness. For instance, we need to have a certain amount of vegetables, fruits, fish and meats, and some ministries should educate properly to the public. Another way to solve obesity is to have a regular exercise. To do so, the local authorities should provide public gyms in some places.
To sum up, I partly agree to tax on fast foods, in fact, we should only focus on the other effective ways to reduce obesity and poor nutrition.
Many
developed nations are facing lack of
good
nutrition and obesity. To solve this problem,
some
people
argue that
government
should tax on
fast
food
,
but
some
argue that it is not a perfect solution.
On the one hand,
fast
foods
are one of the causes of poor nourishment and obesity. Ingredients of
fast
food
are
often
greasy, which can be
side-effects
for our health and it is not suitable for prolonged eating.
However
,
because
of its reasonable price,
many
people
are
still
choosing
fast
foods
instead
of having a balanced-diet.
For example
, I would prefer a burger and coke for my lunch
because
I don't want to spend my time and money for a healthy meal.
Besides
,
fast
foods
are available in
many
places.
So
, taxation on
fast
foods
may bring a second-
thought
of buying and selling them to the consumers and the retailers
respectively
.
On the other hand
, even the
government
will tax on
fast
food
, the problems of health issues will not
be minimized
.
Only
a proper diet may bring sufficient nourishment and it will be beneficial for our fitness.
For instance
, we need to have a certain amount of vegetables, fruits, fish and meats, and
some
ministries should educate
properly
to the public. Another way to solve obesity is to have a regular exercise. To do
so
, the local authorities should provide public gyms in
some
places.
To sum up, I partly
agree
to tax on
fast
foods
, in fact, we should
only
focus on the other effective ways to
reduce
obesity and poor nutrition.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes