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You are working in an international company. You want to quit this job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should say: •Why you want to quit•When you want to leave•What you liked about the company. v.2

You are working in an international company. You want to quit this job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should say: •Why you want to quit•When you want to leave•What you liked about the company. v. 2
Dear Manager, As you know I’ve been working at AWB company for the last 7 years, where I started my first work here, and grew up with this company and passed through many different stages. I am writing to inform you, that it is time to move forward for a new career challenge, that’s why I need to quit from my position. I had the opportunity to work for another international company overseas. I’ve got a high position, with good offer conditions and benefits, that each one try to reach in his life. I am willing to submit my resignation officially by today, hoping it will be accepted from the human resources department and your side. I will send an email also to the HR requesting to finalize all my documents and the pay slips. However, I am going to miss this company and the full support that I gained from the team, in order to be where I am right now. This company was and still my second family and I am sure that the experience that I collected from here, will assist me at my new workplace. I would like to thank you for all these wonderful years, by standing next to me in all good and bad times. Thank you,
Dear Manager,

As you know I’ve been working at AWB
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
for the last 7 years, where I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
my
first
work here, and grew up with this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
and passed through
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
stages. I am writing to inform you, that it is time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
forward for a new career challenge, that’s why I need to quit from my position.

I had the opportunity to work for another international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
overseas.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’ve
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a high position, with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
offer conditions and benefits, that each one try to reach in his life.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am willing to submit my resignation
officially
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
, hoping it will be
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accepted
from the human resources department and your side.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will
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send
an email
also
to the HR requesting to finalize all my documents and the pay slips.

However
, I am going to miss this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
and the full support that I gained from the team, in order to be where I am right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
company
was and
still
my second
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
family and
I am sure that the experience that I collected from here, will assist me at my new workplace.

I would like to thank you for all these wonderful years, by standing
next
to me in all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
times.

Thank you,
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay You are working in an international company. You want to quit this job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should say: •Why you want to quit•When you want to leave•What you liked about the company. v. 2

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
213 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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