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You are the training director for a large international company,and you are organising a two day training course for senior staff. You have invited Professor WILLIAM JONS,a leading expert on industrial relation, to take part the course as a guest lecturer.

You are the training director for a large international company, and you are organising a two day training course for senior staff. You have invited Professor WILLIAM JONS, a leading expert on industrial relation, to take part the course as a guest lecturer. rbYl2
Good part of the day, Pr. W. Jons. As the training director of a massive as well as an international company, I am pleased to invite you to our course dedicated to the executives with a lifelong experience in the sector of industry. It would be honourable for me, as a leader of a ceremony, to welcome you in a two- day course, as a dear and highly respected guest of us. Firmly would it enable the audience with a unique opportunity to profound the knowledge we possess in the field of international relations. Further, we intend to discuss the social aspects of the item included in agenda. Followed with a coffee-break. In the final stage of the appointment, the reputed visitors of the event will gain opportune moment to demonstrate their personal speech and share a positive impression likewise multitude of other speeches conducted by experts. Wittingly, the efforts you pay is expected to be highly appreciated and gratified not only by the other professionals but also for new comers in the world of industrial communications. Providing that you desire to be further informed about the proposal we send you, please let us be aware of it. We will send you contact details, in turn.
Good
part of the day, Pr. W.
Jons
.

As the training director of a massive
as well
as an international
company
, I am
pleased
to invite you to our course dedicated to the executives with a lifelong experience in the sector of industry. It would be
honourable
for me, as a leader of a ceremony, to welcome you in a two- day course, as a dear and
highly
respected guest of us.
Firmly
would it enable the audience with a unique opportunity to profound the knowledge we possess in the field of international relations.
Further
, we intend to discuss the social aspects of the item included in agenda. Followed with a coffee-break. In the final stage of the appointment, the reputed visitors of the
event
will gain opportune moment to demonstrate their personal speech and share a
positive
impression
likewise
multitude of other speeches conducted by experts.
Wittingly
, the efforts you pay is
expected
to be
highly
appreciated and gratified not
only
by the other professionals
but
also
for
new comers
in the world of industrial communications.

Providing that you desire to be
further
informed about the proposal we
send
you,
please
let
us be aware of it. We will
send
you contact
details
, in turn.
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IELTS essay You are the training director for a large international company, and you are organising a two day training course for senior staff. You have invited Professor WILLIAM JONS, a leading expert on industrial relation, to take part the course as a guest lecturer.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
206 words
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