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you are planning to stay in a hotel in an English speaking country. You are writing to the hotel manager to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following questions: • What the daily rate v.1

you are planning to stay in a hotel in an English speaking country. You are writing to the hotel manager to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following questions: • What the daily rate v. 1
Some ideas that whatever comes, you have to accept it and try to overcome it. But I thought, we should calm down and find a best solution to solve the problem. This essay discusses both points of view and why I believe the arguments for finding a stronger solution. In everyday life, there are things happen that we cannot predict. Even if we run away, it already occurs and if a similar circumstance Comes to us, we cannot escape forever. For example: the company we are working with, notifying the financial situation of the company is in trouble, so everyone has to cut wages. In this case, we should accept it and along with the company to overcome difficulties. Also, If you think too much positive, it will lead to us being stressed, it will affect our lives and work. It's better we should this as part of our life. On the other hand, there is also the idea that we should change the situation instead of simply accepting it. When we encounter many matters, it will put us under pressure and also help us more motivation to develop ourselves to improve the condition. For instance: when you see a coworker promote a salary, we should not be jealous and quit the job, but find out a reason why people could achieve and re-evaluate ourselves. Because of a positive outlook, we could gain more energy and even achieve what we have always dreamed of. In conclusion, I believe both arguments help us to improve the state. There is no best solution, depending on the situation we will judge how to handle it.
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ideas
that whatever
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, you
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have to
accept it and try to overcome it.
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But
I
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thought
, we should calm down and find
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a
best solution to solve the problem. This essay discusses both points of view and why I believe the arguments for finding a stronger solution.

In everyday life, there are things happen that we cannot predict. Even if we run away, it already occurs and if a similar
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circumstance


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Comes
to us, we cannot escape forever.
For example
: the
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company
we are working with, notifying the financial situation of the
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company
is in trouble,
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so
everyone
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has to
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cut
wages.
In this case
, we should accept it and along with the
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company
to overcome difficulties.
Also
, If you
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think
too much
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positive
, it will lead to us being
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stressed
, it will affect our
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lives
and work. It's better we should this as part of our life.

On the other hand
, there is
also
the
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idea
that we should
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change
the situation
instead
of
simply
accepting it. When we encounter
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many
matters, it will put us under pressure and
also
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help
us more motivation to develop ourselves to
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improve
the condition.
For instance
: when you
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see
a coworker promote a salary, we should not be jealous and quit the job,
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but
find out a reason why
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people
could achieve and re-evaluate ourselves.
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Because
of a
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positive
outlook, we could gain more energy and even achieve what we have always dreamed of.

In conclusion
, I believe both arguments
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help
us to
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improve
the state. There is no best solution, depending on the situation we will judge how to handle it.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay you are planning to stay in a hotel in an English speaking country. You are writing to the hotel manager to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following questions: • What the daily rate v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
272 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
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