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You are in the UK. Invite a friend to a celebration that you are planning.

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Hi Cloudy We haven't seen each other in a while, are you okay? Next time I want us to celebrate our birthdays together in our garden, like a picnic! We will be preparing some snacks and fruits. And I'll invite Snow and the others. Everyone knows each other so I think we'll be comfortable. I hope there will be an opportunity to relax and have fun after a rather tiring school year. Victoria We haven't seen each other in a while, are you okay? Next time I want us to celebrate our birthdays together in our garden, like a picnic! We will be preparing some snacks and fruits. And I'll invite Snow and the others. Everyone knows each other so I think we'll be comfortable. I hope there will be an opportunity to relax and have fun after a rather tiring school year.
Hi Cloudy

We haven't
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in a while, are you okay?
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snacks and fruits. And I'll invite Snow and the others. Everyone knows each
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we'll be comfortable. I hope there will be an opportunity to relax and have fun after a
rather
tiring school year.

Victoria

We haven't
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seen
each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
in a while, are you okay?
Next
time I want us to celebrate our birthdays together in our garden, like a picnic! We will be preparing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
snacks and fruits. And I'll invite Snow and the others. Everyone knows each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
we'll be comfortable. I hope there will be an opportunity to relax and have fun after a
rather
tiring school year.

IELTS essay You are in the UK. Invite a friend to a celebration that you are planning.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
143 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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