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In future, nobody will buy books because they will be able to read everything online

In future, nobody will buy books because they will be able to read everything online 9l1Wx
Technology plays an important role in every aspects of human life. There are many technological advancements in present, and some of these will have a huge impact on future. One such technology is online books, newspapers, and study materials. In the upcoming years, people’s preference for such books will increase a lot, consequently no one would want to study paper printed books. I completely agree with this. Even now, many youngsters prefer to read online books rather than the traditional book. The reason is online books are easy to find and are cost effective. Any book can be found in the internet anywhere in the world. This reduces the need to go out and search every library or book store for a particular book. Another reason might be they are portable, so students don’t need to carry heavy books anymore. Also, just like the normal books, the electronic books can also highlighted, edited and bookmarked with the help of editor applications. With these many advantages nobody would want to buy original books with high price. In future not only students, even adults would start reading online books and newspapers. This trend has widely put in attention during the Covid-19 pandemic situation when nobody can go out. People felt bored and started reading their favorite books from their laptops, mobile phones and tablets. As a result, many e-books business have been started and developed, and people are enjoying it. Hence, in the succeeding years, the number of e-book store and number of online readers will be dramatically high. Libraries might be empty because the readers will not take trouble to visit them. Only few readers who respects traditional books will buy them.
Technology plays an
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important
role in every
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aspects
of human life. There are
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technological advancements in present, and
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some
of these will have a huge impact on future. One such technology is
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online
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books
, newspapers, and study materials. In the upcoming years,
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people
’s preference for such
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books
will increase a lot,
consequently
no one would want to study paper printed
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books
. I completely
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agree
with this.

Even
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now
,
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many
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online
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books
rather
than the traditional
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book
. The reason is
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online
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books
are easy to find and
are cost
effective. Any
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book
can
be found
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in the internet
anywhere in the world. This
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reduces
the need to go out and search every library or
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book
store for a particular
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book
. Another reason might be they are portable,
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so
students don’t need to carry heavy
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books
anymore.
Also
,
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like the normal
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books
, the electronic
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books
can
also
highlighted, edited and bookmarked with the
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help
of editor applications. With these
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advantages nobody would want to
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buy
original
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books
with high price. In future not
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only
students, even adults would
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start
reading
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online
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books
and newspapers. This trend has
widely
put in attention during the Covid-19 pandemic situation when nobody can go out.
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People
felt bored and
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started
reading their favorite
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books
from their laptops, mobile phones and tablets.
As a result
,
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many
e-books business have been
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started
and developed, and
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people
are enjoying it.

Hence
, in the succeeding years, the number of e-book store and number of
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online
readers will be
dramatically
high. Libraries might be empty
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because
the readers will not take trouble to visit them.
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Only
few readers who
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respects
traditional
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books
will
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buy
them.
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IELTS essay In future, nobody will buy books because they will be able to read everything online

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281 words
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