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I hope, you would be doing well. I'm writing this letter to inform you that I have been shortlisted for Masters in Computer Science from the University of Toronto, Canada. I'll be moving to your city, Toronto by the start of next month. I'm looking forward to meeting you as soon as I'll arrive. As you know that I have been working as a Software Engineer in Pakistan for the past three years and I'm well versed in the website development field. I want to get a part-time job of 20 hours per week in Toronto. This part-time job will help me in paying my University's tuition fee and other living expenses. I'll need your assistance with landing such a job. As you are in the technical community so you can either provide me with a list of contact details of technical recruiters or share the local job hunting sites where I'll be able to forward my resume. Moreover, your reference in my resume will definitely help me in boosting the chances of getting shortlisted. If you have any other suggestions for me then feel free to share those as well. Hoping to hear from you soon with a positive response.

I hope, you would be doing well. I'm writing this letter to inform you that I have been shortlisted
 for Masters in Computer Science from the University of Toronto, Canada. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'll be moving to your city, Toronto by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 of next
 month. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm looking forward to meeting you as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as I'll arrive.

As you know that I have been working as a Software Engineer in Pakistan for the past three years and I'm well versed in the website development field. I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a part-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 of 20 hours per week in Toronto. This part-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in paying my University's tuition fee and other living expenses. I'll need your assistance with landing such a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. As you are in the technical community This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you can either provide me with a list of contact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of technical recruiters or share the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 hunting sites where I'll be able to forward my resume. Moreover
, your reference in my resume will definitely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in boosting the chances of getting shortlisted.

If you have any other suggestions for me then feel free to share those as well
. Hoping to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 with a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response. 