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Homework plays an important role in schooling

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Homework plays an important role in schooling. It brings out some benefits for students, but the first one, I think, is to help them practice. Teachers usually give their students homework about what has already been learned or what is going to be taught. At school, there may not be enough time to understand all of the things or in some cases, you don’t pay enough attention in class. Therefore, doing your homework is a great opportunity to review.

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IELTS essay Homework plays an important role in schooling

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American English

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