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Yesterday I met my best friend at high school

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Yesterday I met my best friend at high school, I had not seen her since after high school. I invited her for a coffe that day. I picked up the menu but I could not read those strang names. I think I made a huge mistake because before thos I had never been to any cafes. I was sweating that my friends helped me by ordering 2 cup of latte. she asked me about my relationship, I told sadly Im single she sked me If it does not mind I would offer my brother to get to know him. I remember I, my friend, and his brother used to play computer game, he would teach us mathematic. my friend showed me the picture of him, I can say I woudnt have seen the handsome guy like him until that time. I have dated nobody in the past 2 years it is the time to take my chance so I took his number. at the end of our meeting I opened my wallet but my friend had
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at high school, I had not
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her since after high school. I invited her for a
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I had never been to any
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was sweating that my
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2 cup
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she
asked me about my relationship, I
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sadly
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single she
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me If it does not mind I would offer my brother to
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get
to know him. I remember I, my
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, and his brother
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used
to play computer game, he would teach us mathematic.
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my
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friend
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showed
me the picture of him, I can say I
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woudnt
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seen
the handsome guy like him until that time. I have dated nobody in the past 2 years it is the time to take my chance
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so
I took his number.
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at
the
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end
of our meeting I opened my wallet
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my
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had
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IELTS essay Yesterday I met my best friend at high school

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
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