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Yes Yes was a gradual growth and a plethora for a long weekend in our

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Anybody will not purchase print magazines or books due to the fact that they can read them online easily without payment not too distant future. This essay will argue that I partially agree with the statement. On the one hand, the majority of elderly people enjoy reading book. It is because they do not often know how to control mobile phone in social media. Namely, they have never used it this kinds of appliance in there all life. Secondly, if everybody use a electronical device in order to read the pdf version, it can cause some diseases which are associated with sight. For example, my friend is who use it to read books and newspapers online, after a long time they needed some treatment for their vision. Thus, this case can deal with other problems in our daily life. On the other hand oh, there are the foremost and first advantages that they can safe our money preventing to spend more money only for reading. Namely, see how our financial side which is essential. Secondly, the technology and internet are developing. And also, we can find any book which I want to read in our leisure Time. Even if the book isn't sold at the market or is very costly, you can get free is this book via internet. What's more, this is beneficial for not only our budget but also our time management which we can download them everywhere. In conclusion, everybody can read everything all life without paying apart from the case that elderly people would rather choose still printed version in the future. I support every side because those situations can be convenient for us.
Anybody will not
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purchase
print magazines or
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books
due to the fact that they can
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read
them online
easily
without payment not too distant future. This essay will argue that I
partially
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agree
with the statement.

On the one hand, the majority of elderly
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people
enjoy reading
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book
. It is
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because
they do not
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often
know how to control mobile phone in social media.
Namely
, they have never
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used
it
Did you mean "these"?
this
kinds of appliance in there all life.
Secondly
, if everybody
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use
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a
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electronical
device in order to
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read
the
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pdf
version, it can cause
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some
diseases which
are associated
with sight.
For example
, my friend is who
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use
it to
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read
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books
and newspapers online, after a long time they needed
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some
treatment for their vision.
Thus
, this case can deal with other problems in our daily life.

On the other hand
oh, there are the foremost and
first
advantages that they can
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safe
our money preventing to spend more money
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only
for reading.
Namely
,
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see
how our financial side which is essential.
Secondly
, the technology and internet are developing. And
also
, we can find any
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book
which I want to
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read
in our leisure Time. Even if the
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book
isn't sold at the market or is
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very
costly, you can
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get
free is this
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book
via internet. What's more, this is beneficial for not
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only
our budget
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but
also
our time management which we can download them everywhere.

In conclusion
, everybody can
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read
everything all life without paying apart from the case that elderly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
would
rather
choose
still
printed version in the future. I support every side
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because
those situations can be convenient for us.
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IELTS essay Yes Yes was a gradual growth and a plethora for a long weekend in our

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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