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'Child sexual abuse is one of the social problems'. Give reasons and solutions to lessen it.

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In this day and age, child sexual abuse is becoming a worldwide concern. This paragraph will elaborate on the reasons and give some solutions to reduce this worrisome matter. In the first place, children’s lack of education breeds sexual abuse. These days, a substantial number of parents are too lenient with their children. Offspring, as a result, don’t have enough knowledge to deal with the problem and are prone to abuse. To solve this issue, children must be educated in necessary life skills at school such as self defense if they unluckily encounter it. In addition, another reason that leads to sexual abuse is children’s poverty. Indeed, poor and needy children are easily exploited by adult abusers, who claim to aid them but take advantage of them. All in all, I firmly believe that the government should implement disciplinary measures to diminish this alarming issue.

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