Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Many people believe that family relations can be improved by cell phone. To what extend do you agree with this opinion?

Many people believe that family relations can be improved by cell phone. bxjXW

Nowadays, cell phones are smarter as they can allow us to call and see anyone's face in the world, or exploit them with some clever features. Therefore, I totally agree that family relations can be improved by cell phone for the following reasons. First, we can use cell phones to call and see our parents' faces when we live away from home. For example, many students living in rural areas choose large cities to attend university. But with a smart mobile phone, we can easily contact our parents via Facebook or Zalo, can see each other and talk to them without fear of spending money on the phone. This is a great thing, helping us to stay connected with our loved ones and share our care more often. Second, we can use the phone to learn some experiences with our parents, such as learning new baking recipes with mom and sister-in-law, learning to play an instrument with our sisters, or listening to English with our brothers. Third, we can use the phone to save family photos when traveling together. For example, An and his family went on a trip to Dalat, they took many photos with the flower garden, stream and, pagodas with their smartphone. Because of that, he and his parents can share photos with each other and review them at any time. To sum up, I fully believe that family relations can be improved by cell phones because of their convenience and intelligence. So, let's take advantage of their great functions to connect with family to create joy for everyone and ourselves.

Nowadays, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
 are smarter Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
as
 they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 us to call and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 anyone's face in the world, or exploit them with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 clever features. Therefore
, I totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 relations can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 for the following reasons.

First
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
 to call and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 our parents' faces when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 away from home. For example
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 students living in rural areas choose large cities to attend university. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 with a smart mobile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
, we can easily
 contact our parents via Facebook or Possible spelling mistake found.HaloALOCalo
Zalo
, can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 each other and talk to them without fear of spending money on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
. This is a great thing, helping us to stay connected with our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 ones and share our care more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
.

Second, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 to learn This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 experiences with our parents, such as learning new baking recipes with mom and sister-in-law, learning to play an instrument with our sisters, or listening to English with our brothers.

Third, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phone
 to save You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 photos when traveling together. For example
, An and his You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 went on a trip to Possible spelling mistake found.DaleyALATDalai
Dalat
, they took This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 photos with the flower garden, stream and, pagodas with their smartphone. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of that, he and his parents can share photos with each other and review them at any time.

To sum up, I fully
 believe that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 relations can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cell
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdialcontactcall up
phones
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of their convenience and intelligence. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
's take advantage of their great functions to connect with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 to create joy for everyone and ourselves. 