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Writing Task 2 Hard work or luck?

Writing Task 2 Hard work or luck? BYBOV

Success needs both hard work and luck. we can’t refuse every successor diligence, but luck is important. Luck is the appropriate time, it is a chance to grow up or collapse. For example, the richest businessman in my country, Jiarawanon, has both keys to success. He imported plant seeds from south China to sell in Thailand many times. He does not have any business competitors at that time, because Thai people don’t know about business and his plant seed is different from a local plant. After he got a big prize from this business, he improves to open minimart nationwide and cooperate with the government to monopolize all markets in Thailand now. As we can see, he not only worked hard to bring goods from China to Sell, he also had a piece of good luck that his product is best-selling, and the government is welcome him.

Success needs both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work and luck. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 can’t refuse every successor diligence, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 luck is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
. Luck is the appropriate time, it is a chance to grow up or collapse. For example
, the richest businessman in my country, Possible spelling mistake found.
Jiarawanon
, has both keys to success. He imported plant seeds from south China to sell in Thailand This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 times. He does not have any business competitors at that time, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 Thai This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 don’t know about business and his plant seed is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from a local plant. After he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 prize from this business, he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorates
improves
 to open Possible spelling mistake found.mini martminim artminima rt
minimart
 nationwide and cooperate with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 to monopolize all markets in Thailand This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. As we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
, he not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 worked This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to bring This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 from China to Sell, he also
 had a piece of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 luck that his product is best-selling, and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 is welcome him. 