WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar graph below shows the numbers of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia in the year 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make co v.3
WRITING TASK 1 The bar graph below shows the numbers of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia in the year 2003.
News has been a reliable source of information and knowledge. Many people believe that newspapers and television channels are impacting us in a positive way, whereas, other people reckon that is disagreement. I strongly agree with this phenomenon and in the ensuing paragraphs I will allude to these arguments further.
Today, the world is changing rapidly, it is crucial to keep ourselves updated with the latest developments. News provides us a deep knowledge and understanding of the latest happenings around the world. For example, a few days ago, thousands of kilometres forest burns in Australia and around one million natural habitats, killed, this news informed and knowing about the phenomena by the news channels. Furthermore, the news helps numerous way. If you are learning a foreign language, it would help in different areas. Such as reading skill, and learning new vocabulary. As a result, it makes very easy for people to react to current events.
Media is the vital source of entertaining, which rejuvenates and entertains us throughout the day. People have a lot of stress in their daily life. Listening to favourite music and watching videos give us a relief from the job work and relaxation from family conflicts. For instance, I am a student who spends around two hours every night to watch a comedy show on television because it is evident that the media plays an important role in our daily life.
To conclude, I strongly opine that the news and media influence people live in a positive way as they entertain and give latest news us.
News
has been a reliable source of information and knowledge.
Many
people
believe that newspapers and television channels are impacting us in a
positive
way, whereas, other
people
reckon
that is
disagreement. I
strongly
agree
with this phenomenon and in the ensuing paragraphs I will allude to these arguments
further
.
Today
, the world is changing
rapidly
, it is crucial to
keep
ourselves updated with the latest developments.
News
provides us a deep knowledge and understanding of the latest happenings around the world.
For example
, a few days ago, thousands of
kilometres
forest burns in Australia and around one million natural habitats, killed, this
news
informed and knowing about the phenomena by the
news
channels.
Furthermore
, the
news
helps
numerous way. If you are learning a foreign language, it would
help
in
different
areas. Such as reading
skill
, and learning
new
vocabulary.
As a result
, it
makes
very
easy for
people
to react to
current
events
.
Media is the vital source of entertaining, which rejuvenates and entertains us throughout the day.
People
have
a lot of
stress
in their daily life. Listening to
favourite
music and watching videos give us a relief from the job work and relaxation from family conflicts.
For instance
, I am a student who spends around two hours every night to
watch
a comedy
show
on television
because
it is evident that the media plays an
important
role in our daily life.
To conclude
, I
strongly
opine that the
news
and media influence
people
live
in a
positive
way as they entertain and give
latest
news
us.
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