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writing task 1 to English advise

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Dear Penfreind, I am writing to you to share with you some advise in regards to improving your English skills before moving to Sydney. As you know, to master English language you will need to work on the four elements of this language: reading, writing, listening and speaking equally. you might find yourself doing better in one area than the other depending on your learning style and that’s ok. I advise you to learn what are you weaknesses and but more study effort and focus in that area. until you feel comfortable. For Reading, I suggest you find books and reading material that discueses an area you are interested in. This will help you get engage more with the content and it will make it less boring. Also, another way that helped me the most which I advise you to give it a shot was enabling subscription when I watch my daily tv shows. For speaking and listening, I recommend you sign up in online chat rooms and speak english with strangers. While it might not be as effective as when you are in an english speaking country, It will help you get pass the stage of fear of making mistakes when speaking. For writing, there is no an easy way for this one, you more you do it the better you get at it. I advise you to check out some of the writing asisstance website which recommends better phrases and vocabulary while you are writing and checks for your grammar mistakes. overall, I recommend you switch your world to english slowley in advance of your arrival to sydney. start by switching the language in your phone and laptop to english then your movies and maybe make a friend in sydney and start chatting with them in advance. I hope you arrive safely to sydney soon and I look forwards to meeting you in person soon. Best wishes,
Dear
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Penfreind
,

I am
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writing
to you to share with you
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some
Did you mean "advice" (noun)?
advise
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
Did you mean "improve"?
improving
your English
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skills
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before
moving to Sydney.

As you know, to master English language you will need to work on the four elements of this language: reading,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
writing
, listening and speaking
equally
.
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you
might find yourself doing better in one area than the other depending on your learning style and that’s ok. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advise
you to learn what are you weaknesses and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
more study effort and
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "focus".
focus in
that area.
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until
you feel comfortable.

For Reading, I suggest you find books and reading material that
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discueses
an area you
are interested
in. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
engage more with the content and it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it less boring.
Also
, another way that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me the most which I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advise
you to give it a shot was enabling subscription when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
my daily
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tv
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
.

For speaking and listening, I recommend you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
up in online chat rooms and speak
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english
with strangers. While it might not be as effective as when you are in an
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english
speaking country, It will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
pass the stage of fear of making mistakes when speaking.

For
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writing
, there is
Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
no
an easy way for this one, you more you do it the better you
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get
at it. I
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advise
you to
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check
out
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
some of the
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writing
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asisstance


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website
which recommends better phrases and vocabulary while you are
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writing
and
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checks
for your grammar mistakes.

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overall
, I recommend you switch your world to
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english
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slowley
in advance of your arrival to
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sydney
.
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start
by switching the language in your phone and laptop to
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english
then your movies and maybe
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a friend in
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sydney
and
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start
chatting with them in advance.

I hope you arrive
safely
to
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sydney
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soon
and I look forwards to meeting you in person
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Best wishes,
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IELTS essay writing task 1 to English advise

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
319 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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