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Writing about your free time

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First of all, nowadays, with busy lifestyles, there is little time for people to develop themselves. If I have some free time, I usually like evolving my skills in my major and another things that I like it. My major is a chemical Engineering, conquensely I really interested in reading books about chemistry, So I usually go to the library in my hometown to see and reading the new books there. it gives me a feeling of comfort there. it is a unique place. Although I am in love in chemistry, I am passionate about physics and math. I am a person has an ambition to spend his free Time in things that will benefit me, but I have another things such as sports. I really like playing football. Whenever I have a chance to get together with my friends, I go out with them. In my free time I love watching TV, but I like watching more movies on it In fact, I like almost all kinds of movies such as comedy movies. On weekends I like watching my favourite YouTube channels. In my free time, I usually make a sandwich, usually for lunch. Like seven days ago, I made a yummy sandwich. I also love going on a trip to visit another city in my country. In sum up, my wisdom in my life and I also use it on my free time as a quote said: '' a person who never made a mistake never tried anything new.
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, nowadays, with busy lifestyles, there is
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for
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to develop themselves. If I have
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, I
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like evolving my
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in my major and another things that I like it.

My major is a chemical Engineering,
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conquensely
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really
interested in reading books about chemistry,
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I
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go to the library in my hometown to
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and reading the new books there.
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gives me a feeling of comfort there.
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is a unique place. Although I am in
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in chemistry, I am passionate about physics and math. I am a person has an ambition to spend his
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free
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in things that will benefit me,
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I have another things such as sports. I
really
like playing football. Whenever I have a chance to
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together with my friends, I go out with them. In my
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I
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watching TV,
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I like watching more movies on it In fact, I like almost all kinds of movies such as comedy movies. On weekends I like watching my
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YouTube channels. In my
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, I
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make
a sandwich,
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for lunch. Like seven days ago, I made a yummy sandwich. I
also
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love
going on a trip to visit another city in my country. In sum up, my wisdom in my life and I
also
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it on my
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as a quote said: '' a person who never made a mistake never tried anything new.
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IELTS essay Writing about your free time

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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