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My laptop is a special and important gift from my parents. They gave it to me when I had studied in grade 12. I was consequently happy. Due to the fact that school bans cell phone use, this laptop was helpful for me to study for the college entrance exam. Then, thanks to my parents, on the college entrance exam, I got an unexpectedly high score. Maybe this is the greatest gift for them. The laptop that is a product was made by Dell Inc. Its color is black. Its size is about 14 inches and weighs 1kg, making it immensely convenient to carry. What I like the most about this laptop is the benefits that it brings that are supremely useful for learning. Especially now that I'm learning online, it makes it easy for me to access new knowledge and work in teams with friends. What's more, it's convenient to look up documents or e-books that teachers send us on this laptop. This is why it's so important to me right now. Aside from that, in my free time, I usually use it to watch films or listen to music. And I know this laptop has a plethora of functions that I haven't used yet. Consequently, I will try to make the most of them in the future. Regardless of material value or spiritual value, this gift is extremely enormous to me. I think I am so lucky when I have been cared for by my parents. I love them!
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is a special and
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gift from my parents. They gave it to me when I had studied in grade 12. I was
consequently
happy. Due to the fact that school bans cell phone
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use
, this
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laptop
was helpful for me to study for the college entrance exam. Then, thanks to my parents, on the college entrance exam, I
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got
an
unexpectedly
high score. Maybe this is the greatest gift for them. The
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laptop
that is
a product
was made
by Dell Inc. Its color is black. Its size is about
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14 inches
and weighs
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1kg
, making it
immensely
convenient to carry. What I like the most about this
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laptop
is the benefits that it brings that are
supremely
useful for learning.
Especially
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now
that I'm learning online, it
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makes
it easy for me to access new knowledge and work in teams with friends. What's more, it's convenient to look up documents or e-books that teachers
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send
us on this
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laptop
. This is why it's
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so
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important
to me right
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now
. Aside from that, in my free time, I
usually
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use
it to
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watch
films or listen to music. And I know this
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laptop
has a plethora of functions that I haven't
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used
yet
.
Consequently
, I will try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the most of them in the future. Regardless of material value or spiritual value, this gift is
extremely
enormous to me. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I am
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so
lucky when I have
been cared
for by my parents. I
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love
them!
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IELTS essay writing about something impotabt that you have

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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