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In my free time, I usually play badminton, listen to music and play game with my sister. I spend more freetime to play badminton and I like best. Firstly, badminton is good for my health. For example, its help to keep fit, weight and beautiful boby. Secondly, play badminton is a sport to easy. This is because, I can play badminton with my family and my friends which help me connect to with member family. Thirdly, it’s a nice way to relax. Because badminton is a fun game to play when I fell sad and it’s help me forget my problems. In short, play badminton is a great way to relax in free time
In my free time, I
usually
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badminton, listen to music and
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game with my sister. I spend more
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freetime
to
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badminton and I like best.
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fit, weight and
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beautiful
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boby
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,
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badminton is a sport to easy. This is
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badminton with my family and my friends which
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me connect to with member family.
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, it’s a nice way to relax.
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badminton is a fun game to
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when I fell sad and it’s
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me forget my problems. In short,
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badminton is a great way to relax in free
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IELTS essay writing about in my free time

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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