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The given diagram illustrates the paint-making process. As can be seen, it is a man-made process that involves seven stages, beginning with the mixing of raw materials and ending in delivery. Firstly, raw materials such as solvents, oils, resins and tints are pumped from a tank farm and pre-mixed with pigments in a different tank. A metering deck is used to measure the quantity and proportion of each element. When the base is formed, it is then placed on a mill to ensure that all the components are properly mixed. At the same time, the let-down process combines the rest of the raw materials in a different tank. Then the mill-base is added to the let-down by stirring and paint is formed. This phase can be repeated in case the paint has not resulted as expected. Upon obtaining the final composition, paint of different colours is dispensed in separate cans by a filling machine. Once the canning process is completed, the cans are labelled accordingly. Finally, the cans of paint are packaged in cartons, ready to be shipped and delivered to customers.

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given
 diagram illustrates the paint-making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
. As You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can
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seen
, it is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
-made You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 that involves seven stages, beginning with the mixing of raw materials and ending in delivery.

Firstly
, raw materials such as solvents, oils, resins and tints are pumped
 from a tank farm and Possible spelling mistake found.premixed
pre-mixed
 with pigments in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 tank. A metering deck is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to measure the quantity and proportion of each element.

When the base is formed
, it is then placed on a mill to ensure that all the components are properly
 mixed. At the same time, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
-down You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 combines the rest of the raw materials in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 tank. Then the mill-base is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
-down by stirring and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvarnishoilenamelcolormakeupcosmetic
paint
is formed
. This phase You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
can
be repeated
 in case the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvarnishoilenamelcolormakeupcosmetic
paint
 has not resulted as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
.

Upon obtaining the final composition, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvarnishoilenamelcolormakeupcosmetic
paint
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Possible spelling mistake. 'colours' is British English.colors
colours
is dispensed
 in separate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
 by a filling machine. Once the canning You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
is completed
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
are labelled
accordingly
. Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbucketjarbottlepackagecanister
cans
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvarnishoilenamelcolormakeupcosmetic
paint
are packaged
 in cartons, ready to be shipped
 and delivered to customers. 