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For a long time, creativeness has motivated the birth and discovery of numerous legacies that are still omnipresent in human civilization. Therefore, people believe that artists in all different realms should be free to creatively showcase all the fantasies in their mind, without being restricted by the government. In my opinion, artists should be encouraged to fully develop their potentials, but the subjects they are aiming at must be selectively categorized.

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IELTS essay creative artists should be free

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

71 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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