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For a long time, creativeness has motivated the birth and discovery of numerous legacies that are still omnipresent in human civilization. Therefore, people believe that artists in all different realms should be free to creatively showcase all the fantasies in their mind, without being restricted by the government. In my opinion, artists should be encouraged to fully develop their potentials, but the subjects they are aiming at must be selectively categorized.
For a long time, creativeness has motivated the birth and discovery of numerous legacies that are
still
omnipresent in human civilization.
Therefore
,
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people
believe that artists in all
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different
realms should be free to
creatively
showcase all the fantasies in their mind, without
being restricted
by the
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government
. In my opinion, artists should
be encouraged
to
fully
develop their potentials,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the subjects they are aiming at
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
selectively
categorized.
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IELTS essay creative artists should be free

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  American English
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