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Giving advice is quite common in Bulgaria.

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Giving advice is quite common in Bulgaria. I also gave free advice to my near and dear ones. I personally believe that by giving advice we show our love and care toward others. It was probably two months ago or so when I was in a dilemma to continue my plan for achieving my goal or to give up due to the fact I was not satisfied with the present results. However, every time when I feel blue I always call my best friend owing to the fact that she is the only person in my life that supports me no matter what I do. It was Friday night when I caller her to share my issue and as I expected she listened to my point of view first before giving me an advice. The moment she understood my fears, she adviced me not to give up on my dreams because I will only regret it later for not trying harder. She made me feel more confident with her motivation speech and made me realize the fact that without any effort and hard work I will be unable to achieve my goal. Without a shadow of a doubt, I trusted her and followed her advice so I can admit that I made the right decision and I will be always thankful for her words.
Giving
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advice
is quite common in Bulgaria. I
also
gave free
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advice
to my near and dear ones. I
personally
believe that by giving
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advice
we
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show
our
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love
and care toward others.

It was
probably
two months ago or
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so
when I was in a dilemma to continue my plan for achieving my goal or to give up due to the fact I was not satisfied with the present results.
However
, every time when I feel blue I always call my best friend owing to the fact that she is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
person in my life that supports me no matter what I do. It was Friday night when I caller her to share my issue and as I
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expected
she listened to my point of view
first
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before
giving me
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an advice
.

The moment she understood my fears, she
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me not to give up on my dreams
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because
I will
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only
regret it later for not trying harder. She made me feel more confident with her motivation speech and made me realize the fact that without any effort and
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hard
work I will be unable to achieve my goal. Without a shadow of a doubt, I trusted her and followed her
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advice
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so
I can admit that I made the right decision and I will be always thankful for her words.
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IELTS essay Giving advice is quite common in Bulgaria.

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