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Mary got off the bus and realized she was holding the wrong bag. she had been on a call all the way. in the light of her big mistake at the company’s contract, she had to solve and didn’t pay attention to her handbag. as soon as she left, she wondered why her bag was so light. and then she looked at the small hole which scratched by her cat to verify if it was hers, however, there wasn’t anything backwards. At once, she called the bus driver: ” wait, I’ve lost my bag, wait! ”however, it seemed that no one heard her disappoting call. Then, she opened the bag to identify who the bag belonged to. surprisingly, it was a 5-billion cheque surrounded by paper. so shocked was she that it took her a while to regain conciousness. When she was about to make a call to the police give it back, a handful of people ran to her and said: ” you are arrested for stealing government’s money”. ”what? but this isn’t my bag. you must mistake me to someone, i’ll eplain, but please let me off first”. regardless of her excuse, theyhandcuff marry. she kept shouting for help but it didn’t work at all. fortunately, there came a woman: ”sorry for hurting you but please look over there”. ”oh my god, what an embrassing moment. ”as it turned out, they wre recording for a reality comedy show.

Mary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 off the bus and realized she was holding the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShe
she
 had been on a call all the way. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 the light of her This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 mistake at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
’s contract, she had to solve and didn’t pay attention to her handbag.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAs
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
, she wondered why her You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 light. Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short)., and
and
 then she looked at the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 hole which scratched by her cat to verify if it was hers, however
, there wasn’t anything backwards. At once, she called the bus driver: Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbolapply
” 
wait, I’ve lost my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
, wait! ”however
, it seemed that no one heard her Possible spelling mistake found.disappointingdisappointdisapproving
disappoting
 call.

Then, she opened the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 to identify who the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 belonged to. surprisingly
, it was a 5-billion Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.check
cheque
 surrounded by paper. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 shocked was she that it took her a while to regain Possible spelling mistake found.consciousness
conciousness
.

When she was about to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a call to the police give it back, a handful of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 ran to her and said: Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbolapply
” 
you are arrested
 for stealing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
’s money”. There should be a space after a closing quote.” what
”what
? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
 this isn’t my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYou
you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 mistake me to someone, Did you mean "I’ll"?I’ll
i’ll
Possible spelling mistake found.explainplaine plain
eplain
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me off first
”. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterRegardless
regardless
 of her excuse, Possible spelling mistake found.they handcuff
theyhandcuff
 marry. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShe
she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 shouting for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it didn’t work at all. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFortunately
fortunately
, there came a woman: There should be a space after a closing quote.” sorry
”sorry
 for hurting you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 look over there”. There should be a space after a closing quote.” oh
”oh
 my god, what an Possible spelling mistake found.embarrassingembracingembossing
embrassing
 moment. There should be a space after a closing quote.” as
”as
 it turned out, they Possible spelling mistake found.arewewerewireworeire
wre
 recording for a reality comedy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
. 