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a situation that I had to use a foreign language to communicate

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I would like to start off by talking about a situation that I had to use a foreign language to communicate. A couple of years ago, since my parents were away, I had to stay at my aunt’s house for a few days. On the way to my aunt’s house, I immediately stumbled upon my foreign teacher who was teaching me English in school. Suddenly, he came up to me and asked for directions to a restaurant. Frankly speaking, I couldn’t comprehend what he wanted to ask since he spoke so quickly. Afterward, he had to slow down and utilize body language that I could understand and directed him to the restaurant. I opted to go with my teacher because the route was so difficult besides it was also close to my aunt’s house. I had always believed that my recollection was correct, then we became disoriented. So, we had to ask inhabitants nearby for instructions. I felt very ashamed because of my road blindness. There were so many reasons why despite the passage of time, I have still remembered this situation. Firstly, in BMT City, I’ve always been confident about my street knowledge, but it’s the first time I’ve been lost. Secondly, I have been learning English for a long time, but I haven’t had many opportunities to practice it with native speakers. To be honest, I used to think that all of those valuable efforts and time of learning English is in vain. This is also a chance for me to evaluate myself and realize the importance of English in society today. I’m quite aware that my English level is still abysmal. Therefore, I have splurged on learning English and circled IELTS. Whereby, I can probably enhance my English speaking abilities and realize a long-held ambition.
I would like to
start
off by talking about a situation that I had to
use
a foreign language to communicate. A couple of years ago, since my parents were away, I had to stay at my aunt’s
house
for a few days. On the way to my aunt’s
house
, I immediately stumbled upon my foreign teacher who was teaching me English in school.

Suddenly
, he came up to me and
asked for
directions to a restaurant.
Frankly
speaking, I couldn’t comprehend what he wanted to ask since he spoke
so
quickly
. Afterward, he had to slow down and utilize body language that I could understand and directed him to the restaurant. I opted to
go with
my teacher
because
the route was
so
difficult
besides
it was
also
close to my aunt’s
house
. I had always believed that my recollection was correct, then we became disoriented.
So
, we had to ask inhabitants nearby for instructions. I felt
very
ashamed
because
of my road blindness.

There were
so
many
reasons why despite the passage of
time
, I have
still
remembered this situation.
Firstly
, in BMT City, I’ve always been confident about my street knowledge,
but
it’s the
first
time
I’ve
been lost
.
Secondly
, I have been learning English for a long
time
,
but
I haven’t had
many
opportunities to practice it with native speakers. To be honest, I
used
to
think
that all of those valuable efforts and
time
of learning English is in vain. This is
also
a chance for me to evaluate myself and realize the importance of English in society
today
. I’m quite aware that my English level is
still
abysmal.
Therefore
, I have splurged on learning English and circled IELTS. Whereby, I can
probably
enhance my
English speaking
abilities and realize a long-held ambition.
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IELTS essay a situation that I had to use a foreign language to communicate

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
298 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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