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Place matters most for the development of a infant. According to the author, people should prefer a metropolitan city over a village. In my opinion, big cities are a better place for children. Firstly, living in a metropolitan city is more stressful than living in a village, as the cost of living is high. The environment in the countryside is pure. For instance, the pollution level of Delhi is highest, while it's vice versa in the villages of India. Children who grow up in a big city have more opportunities. If a minor wants to sing, dance, or play a musical instrument, he or she can easily find different teachers or clubs. A juvenile who is interested in sports has a lot of sports to choose from. In addition, most big cities have excellent museums, zoos, art galleries, and libraries. Therefore, children can spend their evenings, weekends, and summers learning about many different subjects. By experiencing a wide range of activities, children will be able to find out what they like and maybe find a special interest. Secondly, despite some disadvantages, the number of advantages will overshadow it. The children will develop their perspective to see the earth along with ample opportunities available for their career. For example, children can choose their interested field as their career option, as they can easily find different teachers or clubs. Children can develop a earth view in a big city. In big cities, there are people from many different backgrounds. It is good for young people to meet people from different cultures It prepares them for the real world. They can learn ideas or opinions that are different from the ones they are used to. By meeting people from all around the earth, a big city teenager is more likely to consider many different solutions. In conclusion, despite preferring village life, parents should choose metropolitan cities for more opportunities in the future.
Place matters most for the development of
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infant. According to the author,
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people
should prefer a metropolitan city over a
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village
. In my opinion,
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big
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cities
are a better place for children.

Firstly
, living in a metropolitan city is more stressful than living in a
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village
, as the cost of living is high. The environment in the countryside is pure.
For instance
, the pollution level of Delhi is highest, while it's vice versa in the
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villages
of India.
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Children
who grow up in a
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big
city have more opportunities. If a minor wants to sing, dance, or play a musical instrument, he or she can
easily
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find
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different
teachers or clubs. A juvenile who
is interested
in sports has
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a lot of
sports to choose from.
In addition
, most
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big
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cities
have excellent museums, zoos, art galleries, and libraries.
Therefore
,
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children
can spend their evenings, weekends, and summers learning about
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many
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different
subjects. By experiencing a wide range of activities,
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children
will be able to
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find
out what they like and maybe
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find
a special interest.

Secondly
, despite
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some
disadvantages, the number of advantages will overshadow it. The
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children
will develop their perspective to
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see
the earth along with ample opportunities available for their career.
For example
,
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children
can choose their interested field as their career option, as they can
easily
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find
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different
teachers or clubs.
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Children
can develop
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a
earth view in a
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big
city. In
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big
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cities
, there are
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people
from
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many
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different
backgrounds. It is
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good
for young
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people
to
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meet
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people
from
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different
cultures It prepares them for the real world. They can learn
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ideas
or opinions that are
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different
from the ones they are
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used
to. By meeting
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people
from all around the earth, a
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big
city
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teenager
is more likely to consider
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many
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different
solutions.

In conclusion
, despite preferring
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village
life, parents should choose metropolitan
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cities
for more opportunities in the future.
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IELTS essay Write your opinion. with the author? Why?

Essay
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4 paragraphs
319 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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