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Write us a review of the book, explaining what the main character did and why it was surprising. Tell us whether or not you would recommend this book to other people.

Write us a review of the book, explaining what the main character did and why it was surprising. Tell us whether or not you would recommend this book to other people. GwnEg
I enjoy reading ever since I was a kid. I read a number of books. However, the amount of good books is pretty limited. But I have a read a book last week which was a book gave me the creeps as soon as I finished it. I cannot forget its name "The stranger", written by a philosopher Albert Camus. The main character is a nameless man. Readers would not have too much of his personal information. At the beginning of the book, we read about his mother's funeral and he had no emotions for that affair. He continued being weirdly emotionless and meditative. He then romantically involved with a girl. He also got along with a strange neighbor and his revenge. He then shot a religious guy 3 times in a head. The other half of the book was all about his thoughts of being prosecuted and being imprisoned. As the protaganist shot the guy, I was chilled to the bone. I really did not get why the man bahaved strangely and continuously thought about his being. I am sure that people cannot get all these feelings throughout my review. I highly recommend this book to any of you guys love the bizzare and quirky feelings. This book would be challenging if you wait for something fun or entertaining. I hope you like it.
I enjoy reading ever since I was a kid. I read a number of
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books
.
However
, the amount of
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good
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books
is pretty limited.
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But
I have a read a
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book
last week which was a
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book
gave me the creeps as
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soon
as I finished it. I cannot forget its name
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The stranger
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, written by a philosopher Albert Camus. The main character is a nameless
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man
. Readers would not have too much of his personal information. At the beginning of the
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book
, we read about his mother's
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funeral and
he had no emotions for that affair. He continued being
weirdly
emotionless and meditative. He then
romantically
involved with a girl.
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He
also
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along with a strange neighbor and his revenge.
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He
then shot a religious guy 3 times in a head. The other half of the
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book
was all about his thoughts of
being prosecuted
and
being imprisoned
. As the
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protaganist
shot the guy, I
was chilled
to the bone. I
really
did not
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get
why the
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man
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bahaved
strangely
and
continuously
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thought
about his being. I am sure that
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people
cannot
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get
all these feelings throughout my review.
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I
highly
recommend this
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book
to any of you guys
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love
the
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bizzare
and quirky feelings. This
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book
would be challenging if you wait for something fun or entertaining. I hope you like it.
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IELTS essay Write us a review of the book, explaining what the main character did and why it was surprising. Tell us whether or not you would recommend this book to other people.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
225 words
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5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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