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News media have great influence on people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree, give your opinion .

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To many individuals, news is a regular way of life. The issue in dispute is whether news media have great influence on people's lives depicts a negative development. I am of the opinion that news media does more good than bad to the society. Information technology provides people with information they need on daily basis, although there are claims that it selects and report those news/ events that interest the audience. Evidence shows that people all walks of life have the habit of collecting information regularly from media such as broadcast, internet based media etcetera. Information helps in decision making. For instance, information on the outbreak of COVID-19 last year helped government of different countries to take proactive measures to minimize the spread of the virus. However, it should be of note that that, news media can sometimes save lives and reduce casualties. There is a lot of uncertainties in our surroundings and that masses are at risk of harm, kidnap and all manner of life threatening issues from crime, accident, as well as natural calamities. News media conveys first-hand information to concerned authorities, enabling them to take corresponding actions right away. Conclusively, it is pertinent to always listen to news always as this will help take them Away from harms way.
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individuals,
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news
is a regular way of life. The issue in dispute is whether
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news
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media
have great influence on
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people
's
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lives
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negative
development. I am of the opinion that
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news
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media
does more
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good
than
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bad
to the society.

Information technology provides
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people
with
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information
they need on daily basis, although there are claims that it selects and report
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those news
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events
that interest the audience. Evidence
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shows
that
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people
all walks of life have the habit of collecting
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information
regularly
from
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media
such as broadcast, internet based
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media
etcetera.
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Information
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helps
in
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decision making
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information
on the outbreak of COVID-19 last year
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helped
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government
of
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different
countries to take proactive measures to minimize the spread of the virus.

However
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news
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can
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sometimes
save
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lives
and
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reduce
casualties. There is
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a lot of
uncertainties in our surroundings and that masses are at
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risk
of harm, kidnap and all manner of life threatening issues from crime, accident,
as well
as natural calamities.
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News
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media
conveys
first
-hand
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information
to concerned authorities, enabling them to take corresponding actions right away.

Conclusively
, it is pertinent to always listen to
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news
always as this will
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help
take them Away from harms way.
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IELTS essay News media have great influence on people's lives. , give your opinion.

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  American English
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