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Write to advice a friend who just moveed to a new place and is feeling lonely.

Write to advice a friend who just moveed to a new place and is feeling lonely. Lw7gG

It’s a pleasure to hear from you that you moved into a new area. But I’m worry that you’re feeling lonely. But don’t worry because I used to feel like that when I just moved into a new area so I think i can use my experiences to give you some advice. First, you need to find something you would like to do as your hobby. For example, you could play basketball, soccer or some other sport. If you’re still feeling lonely you could go to an arcade near your area. It’ll definitely help you with meeting new people or maybe things that you’ve never seen in your area before. But I know that you don’t prefer doing things alone so the essential tip is to find some friends. They might be your classmates, roommates or anyone in your neighborhood. This advice that I have just suggested will surely heal your lonely. I hope my advice can help you. If you have any problems or have a better idea so please write to let me know.

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moved
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area
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But
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worry
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because
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used
 to feel like that when I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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moved
 into a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
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so
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think
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i
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use
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some
 advice.

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, you need to find something you would like to do as your hobby. For example
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some
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If
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area
. It’ll definitely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you with meeting new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 or maybe things that you’ve never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
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before
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I know that you don’t prefer doing things alone This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the essential tip is to find This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 friends. They might be your classmates, roommates or anyone in your neighborhood. This advice that I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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your
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I hope my advice can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you. If you have any problems or have a better This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
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so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 write to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know. 