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Write “This I believe” essay. It should be an essay from your own life about your core values but it is NOT an opinion piece about social ideals. If it is difficult to start writing on your own topic, you may choose one from these statements:

Write “This I believe” essay. It should be an essay from your own life about your core values but it is NOT an opinion piece about social ideals. If it is difficult to start writing on your own topic, you may choose one from these statements: q0RbX

I believe in wounds are a sign of maturity. Every obstacle which was on my way made me grow gradually. I have personally realized it during covid19 in 2020. My family faced a significant number of hardships because of illness, medicals deficiency. I used to be the youngest and the only daughter in our family, so I was quite spoiled. But then I had to bite the bullet and help my family overcome difficulties by doing household, while my mom and dad could not. Actually, I was not alone at all, i had my brothers, friends and relatives who were constantly helping us, nevertheless, it was whole new experience for me which formed a new mindset in my mind. I believe in value of problems and moment when you solve it in your mind. That turning point was a moment when I was lying and crying over more about stress rather than backpain at midnight. I always considered stress a consequence of something new and extraordinary that happened to us, so that time I also knew and fully felt how I’m getting through completely new things in my life and even at that moment deeply I was excited my new myself, who were fully fledged and level-headed. I strongly believe in vitality of obstacles which only lead to growth and improvement, only thing which should not be missed is your moment of realization and lesson to be learned.

I believe in wounds are a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
 of maturity. Every obstacle which was on my way made me grow gradually
.

I have personally
 realized it during Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid19
 in 2020. My family faced a significant number of hardships This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of illness, medicals deficiency. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be the youngest and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 daughter in our family, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I was quite spoiled. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 then I had to bite the bullet and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 my family overcome difficulties by doing household, while my mom and dad could not. Actually, I was not alone at all, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had my brothers, friends and relatives who were constantly
 helping us, nevertheless
, it was whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 experience for me which formed a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 mindset in my mind.

I believe in value of problems and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointflashjuncturetimedateoccasion
moment
 when you solve it in your mind.

That turning point was a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointflashjuncturetimedateoccasion
moment
 when I was lying and crying over more about This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
rather
 than Possible spelling mistake found.back pain
backpain
 at midnight. I always considered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 a consequence of something You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 and extraordinary that happened to us, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that time I also
 knew and fully
 felt how I’m getting through completely You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 things in my life and even at that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointflashjuncturetimedateoccasion
moment
deeply
 I was excited
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 myself, who were fully
 fledged and level-headed.

I strongly
 believe in vitality of obstacles which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 lead to growth and improvement, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 thing which should not be missed
 is your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointflashjuncturetimedateoccasion
moment
 of realization and lesson to be learned
. 