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Write about your personal story which make make you very sad

Write about your personal story which make make you very sad 0ElNO

I'm Rashik. I belong to an average middle-class family. My father was a businessman. Currently, he is no more. He is the hero of my life. But unfortunately, sometimes I blame him because of our poor income. When he was alive we were financially able to buy our necessary things. But now we think thousand times before we wanna buy something. If we are sick we can't go to the doctor because of our limited income. It hurts more and more but we can nothing to do. The daily expenses of our life are increasing day by day but our limited income is not increasing. Now we think we spend our golden time in childhood.

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Rashik
. I belong to an average middle-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 family. My father was a businessman. Currently
, he is no more. He is the hero of my life. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 unfortunately, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 I blame him This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of our poor income.

“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 he was alive we were financially
 able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 our necessary things. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
Use "a thousand" or use a number before 'thousand'.a thousand
thousand
 times This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 we The word 'wanna' is informal. Consider an alternative.want to
wanna
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 something. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 we are sick we can't go to the doctor This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of our limited income. It hurts more and more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we The word 'nothing' is a noun or an adjective. A verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here, or maybe a comma is missing.
can nothing
 to do.

The daily expenses of our life are increasing day by day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 our limited income is not increasing. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 we spend our golden time in childhood. 