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Write about your personal story which make make you very sad

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I'm Rashik. I belong to an average middle-class family. My father was a businessman. Currently, he is no more. He is the hero of my life. But unfortunately, sometimes I blame him because of our poor income. When he was alive we were financially able to buy our necessary things. But now we think thousand times before we wanna buy something. If we are sick we can't go to the doctor because of our limited income. It hurts more and more but we can nothing to do. The daily expenses of our life are increasing day by day but our limited income is not increasing. Now we think we spend our golden time in childhood.
I'm
Rashik
. I belong to an average middle-
class
family. My father was a businessman.
Currently
, he is no more. He is the hero of my life.
But
unfortunately,
sometimes
I blame him
because
of our poor income.

When
he was alive we were
financially
able to
buy
our necessary things.
But
now
we
think
thousand
times
before
we
wanna
buy
something.
If
we are sick we can't go to the doctor
because
of our limited income. It hurts more and more
but
we
can nothing
to do.

The daily expenses of our life are increasing day by day
but
our limited income is not increasing.
Now
we
think
we spend our golden time in childhood.
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IELTS essay Write about your personal story which make make you very sad

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
115 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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