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Write some things to your best friend.

Write some things to your best friend. wO6Em
If you are reading this, this is exactly what I want to tell you. Even though we don't see each other much or talk much anymore, I'm sure this friendship will never fade away. We all choose a different path and all have different damn obstacles but don't be discouraged, let's conquer it together, if it's too difficult, you can share and confide in me. Lately, I know that you have had some trouble because of some stupid bitches, I also hope the person who swears at you to go to the bathroom and forgets to bring toilet paper ^^. In short, let's be together forever, see you on Tet's holiday. If you are reading this, this is exactly what I want to tell you. Even though we don't see each other much or talk much anymore, I'm sure this friendship will never fade away. We all choose a different path and all have different damn obstacles but don't be discouraged, let's conquer it together, if it's too difficult, you can share and confide in me. Lately, I know that you have had some trouble because of some stupid bitches, I also hope the person who swears at you to go to the bathroom and forgets to bring toilet paper ^^. In short, let's be together forever, see you on Tet's holiday.
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's be together forever,
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see
you on Tet's holiday. If you are reading this, this is exactly what I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you.
Even though
we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
don't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
each other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
much
or talk
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
much
anymore, I'm sure this friendship will never fade away. We all choose a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
path and all have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
damn obstacles
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
don't
be discouraged
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
's conquer it together, if it's too difficult, you can share and confide in me. Lately, I know that you have had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
trouble
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
stupid bitches, I
also
hope the person who swears at you to go to the bathroom and forgets to bring toilet paper
Possible spelling mistake found.
^^
. In short,
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let
's be together forever,
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see
you on Tet's holiday.
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IELTS essay Write some things to your best friend.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
222 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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