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Write en article answering to the following questions: What forms of transport will we be using in 50 years' time? Where will we take our holidays?

Write en article answering to the following questions: What forms of transport will we be using in 50 years' time? Where will we take our holidays? NlA5d

The galaxy travels every year as you study more, because everyone wants to go to another planet on vacation, don't they? Also, I believe 2 ways are very cheap and fast and it will be used in 50 years so I would like to be the first to ride in the spaceship. Moreover, I think the best transport in 50 years it’s a caravan with propellers, because I can go to the galaxy without any problem and I have all the things for staying a long time there. Also, I can go with more people, because it's bigger than a spaceship and comfortable. Another transport, it can be a house that has strong thrusters and when you want to go back home the big magnet attracts your house. Furthermore, if the company creates a transport in the next few years, I will go to another galaxy and planet, because I feel free with anyone. Also, I can see all the beginnings and planets differently from the earth plane. In conclusion, the galaxy is the next station in 50 years, because nowadays we are searching for new destinations. Do you travel to the galaxy?

The galaxy travels every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 as you study more, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 everyone wants to go to another planet on vacation, don't they? Also
, I believe 2 ways are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 and it will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in 50 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I would like to be the first
 to ride in the spaceship.

Moreover
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the best transport in 50 years it’s a caravan with propellers, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I can go to the galaxy without any problem and I have all the things for staying a long time there. Also
, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it's bigger than a spaceship and comfortable. Another transport, it can be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 that has strong thrusters and when you want to go back home the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 magnet attracts your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

Furthermore
, if the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 creates Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "transport".transport
a transport
 in the next
 few years, I will go to another galaxy and planet, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I feel free with anyone. Also
, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 all the beginnings and planets differently


from the earth This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
.

In conclusion
, the galaxy is the next
 station in 50 years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 nowadays we are searching for new destinations. Do you travel to the galaxy? 