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Write at least three sentences about each How machines help me

Write at least three sentences about each How machines help me VPLW3
In the past, people worked very hard because they didn't have support for machines. Nowadays, everything becomes easy with support for machines. Machines help me very much with housework. I can cook faster with a microwave. When I want to drink a coffee, the coffee marker helps me to do this. Sometimes my family has a big party and after that will have a lot of cups, bowls and then a dishwasher to do this very well.
In the past,
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people
worked
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very
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hard
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because
they didn't have support for machines. Nowadays, everything becomes easy with support for machines. Machines
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help
me
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very
much with housework. I can cook faster with a microwave. When I want to drink a coffee, the coffee marker
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helps
me to do this.
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Sometimes
my family has a
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big
party and after that will have
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a lot of
cups, bowls and then a dishwasher to do this
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very
well.
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IELTS essay Write at least three sentences about each How machines help me

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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