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During the pandemic of Covid-19, many students have been suffering from mental disorders such as stress, anxiety, and worry. What are the suggested solutions for these problems?

During the pandemic of Covid-19, many students have been suffering from mental disorders such as stress, anxiety, and worry. What are the suggested solutions for these problems? yLl5P
The pandemic of Covid-19 just brought so many inconviniences to our life. Some people lose their job, some has to stay apart from their beloved. Due to it, many students must study online for a long time. That makes some of them have been suffering from mental disorders such as stress, anxiety, and worry. Then how could they overcome with those problems? Without meeting your friends for a long time, you will feel really miss them so bad. Then it would be a good chance if you want to create new realtionships with others. Maybe they would play an important role during this time: someone you could talk to, a person you can rely on. In the other hand, you could join some clubs or a group about your hobbies, things you like.
The pandemic of Covid-19
just
brought
so
many
inconviniences
to our life.
Some
people
lose their job,
some
has to
stay apart from their beloved. Due to it,
many
students
must
study online for a long time. That
makes
some
of them have been suffering from mental disorders such as
stress
, anxiety, and worry. Then how could they overcome with those problems? Without meeting your friends for a long time, you will feel
really
miss them
so
bad
. Then it would be a
good
chance if you want to create new
realtionships
with others. Maybe they would play an
important
role during this time: someone you could talk to, a person you can rely on. In the other hand, you could
join
some
clubs or a group about your hobbies, things you like.
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IELTS essay During the pandemic of Covid-19, many students have been suffering from mental disorders such as stress, anxiety, and worry. What are the suggested solutions for these problems?

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