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When I have time, I usually read the book. I started reading a book when I was in grade 8 and I realized reading book is an interested and helpful activity for teenagers. It helps them have more knowledge, plenty of ideas of everything even keep their brain are getting better. I spend 30 or 45 minutes reading a book every day, but if I had more time I will read more. I remembered the first book I have read was an English book, and at that time I had difficulty in understanding what they write what they want to pass down for me. I adore reading many kinds of books like about cultures, life, motivation and so on. I enjoy drinking a cup of tea, reading books in the place of the quiet space in my pastime. That makes me relax and feel better after hard work. Everyone has their hobbies, and I am glad that I could find the hobby, which is very useful for me.
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when I was in grade 8 and I realized
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is an interested and helpful activity for
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their brain are getting better. I spend 30 or 45 minutes
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every day,
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if I had more time I will read more. I remembered the
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I have read was an English
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, and at that time I had difficulty in understanding what they write what they want to pass down for me.
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adore
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kinds of
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like about cultures, life, motivation and
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on.
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I
enjoy drinking a cup of tea,
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in the place of the quiet space in my pastime. That
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makes
me relax and feel better after
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work. Everyone has their hobbies, and I am glad that I could find the hobby, which is
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IELTS essay write and describe about your hobbies

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
168 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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