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describe a journey that didn't go as planned

describe a journey that didn't go as planned V09wD

Well, planning is played essential role in every task, however sometimes planning didn't work because of situation. Initially, now I want to talk about trip which discussed with my friends. It was 2 months ago and we planned to visit mountains as well as we wanted going to this place not only by bus but also by car, as a result we prefer bus. Furthermore, in the middle of the way we become to the police station and in this time I remembered about my passport, but unfortunately I was forget my passport at home, so when policeman ask me about passport I said him i forgot at home, as a result bus driver had to left me in police station. To sum up, police station not have any restaurants or cafes to eat something as well as after some times they ask me some questions and were brought to my house in a police car

Well, planning is played
 essential role in every task, however
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 planning didn't work This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of situation.

Initially
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I want to talk about trip which discussed with my friends. It was 2 months Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).ago, and
ago and
 we planned to visit mountains as well
 as we wanted going to this place not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 by bus This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 by car, as a result
 we prefer bus.

Furthermore
, in the middle of the way we become to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetectiveforcelaw enforcementman
police
 station and in this time I remembered about my passport, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 unfortunately I was Consider using a past participle here: "forgotten".forgotten
forget
 my passport at home, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 when policeman ask me about passport I 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean "told"?told
said
 him Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 forgot at home, as a result
 bus driver had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 me in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetectiveforcelaw enforcementman
police
 station.

To sum up, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetectiveforcelaw enforcementman
police
 station not have any restaurants or 'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"cafés
cafes
 to eat something as well
 as after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 times they ask me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 questions and were brought
 to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetectiveforcelaw enforcementman
police
 car