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write an essay to talk about some tricks that you have encountered or are using

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In daily life, it is not difficult for everyone to see some tricks such as in advertising; make up; clothing style; magic…etc. Makeup is used on me make me feel more confidence and more beautiful. Thus, I choose makeup as a trick which used by me. The first and the most important thing are I know a lot about makeup. It seems like in my blood, me and makeup similar to twin. I enthused about makeup when I still truly young. I learn about it day by day until now, I confident that I completely have ability to makeup with various styles such as Korean style; EU style; Thailand style…et cetera. In addition, everyone will be impressed by dressing and other people’s faces first. Therefore, if you can makeup quite good that you may get good impression with the other. For example: In an interview, interviewers do not know who you are, nevertheless, they will judge you by your appearance first. If your appearance look elegantly, interviewers may get more good impression on you. Last but not least, makeup can aid me to reduce stress. When I am burned out inasmuch working or studying, I am going to makeup. It makes me feel calm, comfortable and get my power back. Recent time, I have so great number of exercise and I can not control all of them further exam is coming up. Therefore, I am under pressure at all. Makeup likable savior, I catch it like the best desire. Fortunately, it brought me back to equilibrium and I am pretty grateful for that. For me, makeup, not only just a trick but also more than a passion. For that reason, if I can use a trick on me, I will do it without hesitation.
In daily life, it is not difficult for everyone to
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some
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tricks
such as in advertising;
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make
up; clothing
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style
; magic…etc.
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Makeup
is
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used
on me
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make
me feel more confidence and more
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beautiful
.
Thus
, I choose
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makeup
as a
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trick
which
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used
by me.

The
first
and the most
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important
thing are I know a lot about
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makeup
. It seems like in my blood, me and
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makeup
similar to twin. I enthused about
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makeup
when I
still
truly
young. I learn about it day by day until
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now
, I confident that I completely have ability to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
makeup
with various
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
styles
such as Korean
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style
; EU
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style
; Thailand style…
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et cetera
.
In addition
, everyone will
be impressed
by dressing and other
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people
’s faces
first
.
Therefore
, if you can
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makeup
quite
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good
that you may
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get
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good
impression with the other.
For example
: In an interview, interviewers do not know who you are,
nevertheless
, they will judge you by your appearance
first
. If your appearance look
elegantly
, interviewers may
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get
more
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good
impression on you. Last
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but
not least,
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makeup
can aid me to
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reduce
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stress
. When I
am burned
out inasmuch working or studying, I am going to
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makeup
. It
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makes
me feel calm, comfortable and
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get
my power back. Recent time, I have
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so
great number of exercise and I can not control all of them
further
exam is coming up.
Therefore
, I am under pressure at all.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Makeup
likable savior, I catch it like the best desire.
Fortunately
, it brought me back to
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equilibrium and
I am pretty grateful for that.

For me,
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makeup
, not
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only
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just
a
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trick
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but
also
more than a passion. For that reason, if I can
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use
a
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trick
on me, I will do it without hesitation.
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IELTS essay write an essay to talk about some tricks that you have encountered or are using

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
294 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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