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Introduce yourself to a program

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Hello, my name is Hoang Nguyen Thien Trang, I am 16 years old now and am a student at Thai Phien school, Da Nang city. I love reading, dancing, singing and especially playing musical instruments: guitar and piano in my free time. My hobby and passion is learning languages, except for my mother tongue, I can speak Italian, English and a little bit of French. The reason why i think this program fits me because i am a person who enjoy and love to
Hello, my name is
Hoang
Nguyen
Thien
Trang
, I am 16 years
old
now
and am a student at Thai
Phien
school,
Da
Nang
city. I
love
reading, dancing, singing and
especially
playing musical instruments: guitar and piano in my free time. My hobby and passion is learning languages,
except for
my mother tongue, I can speak Italian, English and a
little bit
of French. The reason why
i
think
this program fits me
because
i
am a person who enjoy and
love
to
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IELTS essay Introduce yourself to a program

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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