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Nowadays, surrounding of person are being deteriorated due to the various factors. What are the factors. How can be controlled theses factors.

Nowadays, surrounding of person are being deteriorated due to the various factors. What are the factors. How can be controlled theses factors. Dwg56
Undoubtedly, in this present day, environment are being destroyed due to different kind of reasons. There are many reasons which damage to our surrounding along with some way to mitigate this problem. This essay I will discuss reason and solutions of this aspects. Commencing with, there are myarid of reasons why it is deteriorated. The prominent one is that pollution. To explicate it, there are different kind of pollution such as air pollution, noise pollution and water pollution which is determintal for environment. Mainly air pollution are created by vehicle and machine. Moreover, water pollution also spread by garbage and factory because of people are thrown rubbish in river and lake which make pollute. Another striking reason is that deforestation. To elaborate it, people are cutting the trees which have put on negative effect on soil erosion which is harmful for environment. As a result, these kind of pollution are make dirty environment. Shifting towards discussing the solution. awarness can be considered a ponpanderant one. In other words, government ought to organise campus for spreading awareness between individuals. Besides this, government should start use odd even number in transportation. owing to this, the pollution can be alleviated. Moreover government should planted trees because it can create greenery and make clean environment. The authority and individual should some effort for saving environment as well as it can be assist to clean surrounding. To recapitulate, according to this argument, although there are numerous factors which damage to environment, it can controlled by some ways.
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, in this present day,
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environment
are being
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destroyed
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different
kind of
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reasons
. There are
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many
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reasons
which damage to our surrounding along with
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some
way to mitigate this problem. This essay I will discuss
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reason
and solutions of
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this
aspects. Commencing with, there are
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myarid
of
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reasons
why it
is deteriorated
. The prominent one is that
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pollution
. To explicate it, there are
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different
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kind
of
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pollution
such as air
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pollution
, noise
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pollution
and water
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pollution
which is
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determintal
for
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environment
.
Mainly
air
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pollution
are created
by vehicle and machine.
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, water
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pollution
also
spread by garbage and factory
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because
of
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people
are thrown
rubbish in river and lake which
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make
pollute. Another striking
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reason
is that deforestation. To elaborate it,
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people
are cutting the trees which have put on
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negative
effect on soil erosion which is harmful for
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environment
.
As a result
,
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these kind
of
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pollution
are
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make
dirty
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environment
. Shifting towards discussing the solution.
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awarness
can
be considered
a
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ponpanderant
one.
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,
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government
ought to
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organise
campus for spreading awareness between individuals.
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this,
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government
should
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start
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use
odd even number in transportation.
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owing
to this, the
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pollution
can
be alleviated
.
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Moreover
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government
should
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planted
trees
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because
it can create greenery and
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make
clean
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environment
. The authority and individual should
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some
effort for saving
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environment
as well
as it can be
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assist
to clean surrounding. To recapitulate, according to this argument, although there are numerous factors which damage to
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environment
, it can
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controlled
by
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some
ways.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, surrounding of person are being deteriorated due to the various factors. What are the factors. How can be controlled theses factors.

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