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Write an essay about traffic problems in your city

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Nowadays, traffic problems have been a fascinating topic for any article as well as the newspaper as it has such a tremendous impact on the life of people. Transportation problems also negatively affect the work, education, and personal life of people and finally to the progress of the country. It is also one of the most vital problems in Da Nang city in the past few years. On average, about 500 accidents are happening in one day. Along with that, too many vehicles on the street can cause traffic jams in cities during rush hours. The frequent breaking traffic jams burn more fuel. Hence more greenhouse gases are being released into the air. Moreover, Unsafe driving is the main impact of traffic jams that may lead to road mishaps and even injuries. Besides, drinking alcohol is also the main cause of many transport tragedies and may lead to death. Every year, the number of accidents which are relevant to alcohol is growing quickly and have been the cause of many innocent people's deaths. Last but not least, traffic rules are barely being cared about and usually violated by traffic users, such as passing red lights or carrying sharp items. Those behaviours are strictly restricted to protect your own lives. I hope that DaNang traffic problems will soon be improved for a better future.
Nowadays,
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have been a fascinating topic for any article
as well
as the newspaper as it has such a tremendous impact on the life of
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people
. Transportation
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problems
also
negatively
affect the work, education, and personal life of
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people
and
finally
to the progress of the country. It is
also
one of the most vital
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problems
in
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Nang
city in the past few years. On average, about 500 accidents are happening in one day. Along with that, too
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many
vehicles on the street can cause
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traffic
jams in cities during rush hours. The frequent breaking
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traffic
jams burn more fuel.
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Hence
more greenhouse gases are
being released
into the air.
Moreover
, Unsafe driving is the main impact of
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traffic
jams that may lead to road mishaps and even injuries.
Besides
, drinking alcohol is
also
the main cause of
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many
transport tragedies and may lead to death. Every year, the number of accidents which are relevant to alcohol is growing
quickly
and have been the cause of
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many
innocent
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people
's deaths. Last
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but
not least,
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traffic
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rules
are
barely
being cared
about and
usually
violated by
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traffic
users, such as passing red lights or carrying sharp items. Those
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behaviours
are
strictly
restricted to protect your
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own
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lives
. I hope that
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DaNang
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traffic
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problems
will
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soon
be
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improved
for a better future.
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IELTS essay Write an essay about traffic problems in your city

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
223 words
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