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“ Terrorism and Media hold a relationship “ Write an argumentative essay, give some examples from your knowledge and experience.

“ Terrorism and Media hold a relationship “ Write an argumentative essay, give some examples from your knowledge and experience. qV0YE
In such a modern world where distinctive Mass - media kinds developed considerably, Terrorists tend to have reliable collaborators to broadcast news about their activities over the world. Therefore, there is no need to have any other assistants for Terrorists to increase the productivity of their evil actions. In this essay, I will look through certain challenges of this issue and give relative examples to support this argument. Initially, it should be noted that the prime goal of terrorists is to make whole human beings to pay attention to their actions. Hence, in this situation, the Internet and other Television sets would help terrorist to attract more attention, because the life in a current world can not be imagined without the influence of the social medias and moreover, people tend to endeavor to be aware of fresh news as soon as it emerges. Thereby, any tiny, unusual moment spreads fast among people, particularly the actions which can intrigue them with frightening consequences. In this situation, Mass – media plays the most important role, however the problem is that the representatives of Mass-media do not always realize the further consequences of their ambition to be the first at broadcasting any news with their brands. In most cases, they just try to get involved by more people and to gain a prosperous career being popular over the world. Eventually, Terrorism can have a comfortable opportunity to improve the effects of their evil actions on account of the endeavors of Mass – media representatives to spread the information about terrorist actions among populations. Furthermore, this is often considered a relationship between terrorism and Media. In conclusion, with the help of Mass - media employees, Terrorism can have a convenient situation to be more effective among people. This relationship between them happens unintentionally, nonetheless it can not be denied these days.
In such a modern
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world
where distinctive
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Mass
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-
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media
kinds developed
considerably
,
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Terrorists
tend to have reliable collaborators to broadcast news about their activities over the
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world
.
Therefore
, there is no need to have any other assistants for
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Terrorists
to increase the productivity of their evil actions. In this essay, I will look through certain challenges of this issue and give relative examples to support this argument.

Initially
, it should
be noted
that the prime goal of
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terrorists
is to
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make
whole human beings to pay attention to their actions.
Hence
, in this situation, the Internet and other Television sets would
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help
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terrorist
to attract more attention,
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because
the life in a
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current
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world
can not
be imagined
without the influence of the social
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medias
and
moreover
,
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people
tend to endeavor to be aware of fresh news as
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soon
as it emerges. Thereby, any tiny, unusual moment spreads
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fast
among
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people
,
particularly
the actions which can intrigue them with frightening consequences. In this situation,
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Mass
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–
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media
plays the most
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important
role,
however
the problem is that the representatives of Mass-media do not always realize the
further
consequences of their ambition to be the
first
at broadcasting any news with their brands.
In most cases
, they
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just
try to
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get
involved by more
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people
and to gain a prosperous career being popular over the
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world
.
Eventually
, Terrorism can have a comfortable opportunity to
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improve
the effects of their evil actions on account of the endeavors of
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Mass
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–
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media
representatives to spread the information about
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terrorist
actions among populations.
Furthermore
, this is
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often
considered a relationship between terrorism and Media.

In conclusion
, with the
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help
of
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Mass
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-
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media
employees, Terrorism can have a convenient situation to be more effective among
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people
. This relationship between them happens
unintentionally
, nonetheless it can not
be denied
these days.
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IELTS essay “ Terrorism and Media hold a relationship “ Write an argumentative essay, give some examples from your knowledge and experience.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
307 words
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