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Write an essay about last trip you went and express your feelings during that trip.

Write an essay about last trip you went and express your feelings during that trip. Wn71D
Last week I went to one of the most interesting places in Muscat which is called Water Front. There were some activities and restaurants that offered every types of food, so not just the Omani people can trying these restaurants but also the foreign people. Actually the view was amazing because I Love the sea, so the. view was such wonderful that can make the person feel better. It was really amazing when I tried the new restaurant which is special in breakfast food in water front Muscat. They have a lot of types from the breakfast such as Arabic, Italy, French and Asian. I like the way of preparing the food and how they introduce it in a very organised way. I remember also the tea and that amazing taste and it was really delicious and I wish to try it again with my sister’s because the tea is one of the most important drinks in our family.
Last week I went to one of the most interesting places in Muscat which
is called
Water Front. There were
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some
activities and restaurants that offered every
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types
of food,
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not
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just
the Omani
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people
can trying these restaurants
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but
also
the foreign
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people
. Actually the view was amazing
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because
I
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Love
the sea,
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so
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the.
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view
was such wonderful that can
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make
the person feel better. It was
really
amazing when I tried the new restaurant which is special in breakfast food in water front Muscat. They have
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a lot of
types from the breakfast such as Arabic, Italy, French and Asian. I like the way of preparing the food and how they introduce it in a
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very
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organised
way. I remember
also
the tea and that amazing taste and it was
really
delicious and I wish to try it again with my sister’s
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because
the tea is one of the most
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important
drinks in our family.
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IELTS essay Write an essay about last trip you went and express your feelings during that trip.

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