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Bad days or good days is the part of human being life. Do you agree?

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Every human being have their past and memories of bad or good days. It is the part of every individual they can't run from their time. This essay will discuss the value of bad days and good day. Every successful person have there bad past and he saw lots of difficulty. Every businessman starts with zero and he saw losts many time but he can't quite and after hardworking and believe on self he get his goals.
Every human being have their past and memories of
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bad
or
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days. It is the part of every individual they can't run from their time. This essay will discuss the value of
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bad
days and
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good
day.

Every successful person have there
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bad
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past and
he
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saw
lots of difficulty. Every businessman
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starts
with
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
zero and
he
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saw
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losts
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many time
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but
he can't quite and after hardworking and believe on self he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "gets", "got".
get
his goals.
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IELTS essay Bad days or good days is the part of human being life. Do you agree?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
77 words
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