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Write an essay about advantages and disadvantages of Vietnam being a member of ASEAN

Write an essay about advantages and disadvantages of Vietnam being a member of ASEAN ArGAX
ASEAN stands for the Association of Southeast Asian Nations and it was formed on August 8, 1967. ASEAN now consists of ten member states and Vietnam is one of them. This essay will discuss the advantages as well as difficulties of Vietnam as a member of ASEAN. On the one hand, there are various benefits when Vietnam becomes a part of ASEAN. Firstly, as an agricultural country, Vietnam is currently a major source of manufactured goods in the world with main export items such as rice, rubber, coffee, and so on. Secondly, joining ASEAN is Vietnam's first international economic integration step and the basis for Vietnam to promote its policy of international economic integration. In addition, it helps Vietnam's economic relations with partner countries expand, creating a basis for Vietnam to integrate economically and politically at different levels. On the other hand, besides the opportunities, there are still some challenges that Vietnam has to face when participating in ASEAN. One of Vietnam's biggest difficulties is the disparity in socio-economic development compared to other member countries. However, during the time of joining ASEAN, the gap between us and other member countries has improved and narrowed significantly thanks to the efforts of Vietnam. Next is the difference in political institutions as well as in language, which has caused many difficulties for Vietnam to integrate with other countries. All in all, joining ASEAN brings a lot of advantages but also some disadvantages to Viet Nam. I suggest that Viet Nam should find appropriate measures to further promote these strengths as well as limit the negative aspects.
ASEAN stands for the Association of Southeast Asian Nations and it
was formed
on August 8, 1967. ASEAN
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now
consists of ten
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member
states and Vietnam is one of them. This essay will discuss the advantages
as well
as difficulties of Vietnam as a
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member
of ASEAN.

On the one hand, there are various benefits when Vietnam becomes a part of ASEAN.
Firstly
, as an agricultural
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country
, Vietnam is
currently
a major source of manufactured
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goods
in the world with main export items such as rice, rubber, coffee, and
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so
on.
Secondly
, joining ASEAN is Vietnam's
first
international economic integration step and the basis for Vietnam to promote its policy of international economic integration.
In addition
, it
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helps
Vietnam's economic relations with partner
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countries
expand, creating a basis for Vietnam to integrate
economically
and
politically
at
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different
levels.

On the
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other
hand,
besides
the opportunities, there are
still
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some
challenges that Vietnam
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has to
face when participating in ASEAN. One of Vietnam's biggest difficulties is the disparity in
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socio-economic
development compared to
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other
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member
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countries
.
However
, during the time of joining ASEAN, the gap between us and
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other
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member
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countries
has
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improved
and narrowed
significantly
thanks to the efforts of Vietnam.
Next
is the difference in political institutions
as well
as in language, which has caused
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many
difficulties for Vietnam to integrate with
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other
countries.

All in all, joining ASEAN brings
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a lot of
advantages
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but
also
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some
disadvantages to
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Viet
Nam. I suggest that
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Viet
Nam should find appropriate measures to
further
promote these strengths
as well
as limit the
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negative
aspects.
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IELTS essay Write an essay about advantages and disadvantages of Vietnam being a member of ASEAN

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263 words
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