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Write an email to a friend about your experience

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Hi kyaw How are you? I know you are doing busy with your school. Anyway, did you remember that I talked about buying iPad air Lastly, I bought it last week. If you are beside me, you would ask me why I needed to buy it. As a reason, it is easy to take out, can write using the magic keyboard and can sketch with the pencil. It is remarkably useful for me who do creative work. Therefore, I want to buy passionately this one. Furthermore, I hardly saved money that I could afford to buy within five months. As you know, I don't have full-time job so that is why I couldn't get a regular salary. So, I started planning to get this - I worked many part-time job until no rest days and collect the money 200 dollars in a week. I was decided to waste money such as hanging out and go shopping until to get what I wanted. I have been being workaholic for the last five months. As a result that, I couldn't express how I delighted when I could buy what I really needed. It can not be enough described as words. And when I work with this iPad air- a pink colour which is one of my favourite colour, I feel like a butterfly is in my heart. DUN FORGET TO REPLY MY EMAIL Looking forward hear something from you soon. Your dearest, Tharaphu
Hi
kyaw


How are you? I know you are doing busy with your school. Anyway, did you remember that I talked about buying
iPad air
Lastly
, I
bought
it last week. If you are beside me, you would ask me why I needed to
buy
it. As a reason, it is easy to take out, can write using the magic keyboard and can sketch with the pencil. It is
remarkably
useful for me who do creative work.
Therefore
, I want to
buy
passionately
this one.

Furthermore
, I hardly saved money that I could afford to
buy
within five months. As you know, I don't have full-time job
so
that is
why I couldn't
get
a regular salary.
So
, I
started
planning to
get
this
-
I worked
many
part-time job until no rest days and collect the money 200 dollars in a week. I
was decided
to waste money such as hanging out and go shopping until to
get
what I wanted. I have been being workaholic for the last five months.

As a result
that, I couldn't express how I delighted when I could
buy
what I
really
needed.

It can not be
enough
described
as words. And when I work with this
iPad air
- a pink
colour
which is one of my
favourite
colour
, I feel like a butterfly is in my heart.

DUN FORGET TO REPLY MY EMAIL

Looking forward hear something from you
soon
.

Your dearest,

Tharaphu
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IELTS essay Write an email to a friend about your experience

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
240 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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