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Dear Takashi, I would like to invite you for a meal on Sunday in the Happy Lobster restaurant. It’s a top-class food with varied fish and seafood dishes. It has prawns, crab and oysters. This restaurant well-known for giant crab with spring onions. In menu also includes vegetarian dishes, a few beef and pork dishes and delicious desserts. It’s extremely suitable for your taste. People who eaten in this restaurant said that The Happy Lobster is a quiet atmosphere restaurant. Moreover, it is located on the shore with a wonderful view of the bay and city at night. In addition, classical music playing all the time. Average cost of this restaurant is $120 per person. However, it is 2 miles from city center. You have to go restaurant by boat about half an hour and 20 minutes by car. Maybe you get tired and exhausted. Besides, you probably wait a long time for service and bill. I hope you can come. Regards, Ren Le Thi Phan Ren
Dear
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I would like to invite you for a meal on Sunday in the Happy Lobster restaurant.

It’s a top-
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food with varied fish and seafood dishes. It has prawns, crab and oysters. This
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restaurant
well-known for giant crab with spring onions. In menu
also
includes vegetarian dishes, a
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few beef
and pork dishes and delicious desserts. It’s
extremely
suitable for your taste.

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People
who eaten in this
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restaurant
said that The Happy Lobster is a quiet atmosphere
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restaurant
.
Moreover
, it
is located
on the shore with a wonderful view of the bay and city at night.
In addition
, classical music playing all the time. Average cost of this
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restaurant
is $120 per person.

However
, it is
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2 miles
from city center. You
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go
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restaurant
by boat about half an hour and 20 minutes by car. Maybe you
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get
tired and exhausted.
Besides
, you
probably
wait a long time for service and bill.

I hope you can
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come
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Regards,

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IELTS essay write an email for customer

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9 paragraphs
166 words
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